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Fall Series Draft #2


In this new draft, I realized that Jasper James' City Silhouettes were a bit brighter than what I had made them and that the photos of the people were all different sizes. Some of them were zoomed in while others were farther way. I started with the city as the background but I only edited it after I combined it with the picture of the person. This way, it allowed me to see how much the background need to brighten to make the picture of the perosn stand out more. 

















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  1. MaxNovember 3, 2017 at 11:48 PM

    I think you did a really good job editing your photos! You also completed your goals because you used different angles and perspectives for each portrait. Keep up the good work!

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  2. KikiNovember 4, 2017 at 4:05 PM

    You did a great job of following your visual recipe. I agree with Max that the use of different angles and perspectives look really nice. Nice job!

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  3. AnonymousNovember 4, 2017 at 4:56 PM

    I like what you did with these photos, my suggestion is to not have the photo be too close up of the people.

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  4. AnonymousNovember 5, 2017 at 7:48 PM

    These are amazing! I love the photos in which the subject is staring out into the city. I like the angles in which you took the photos, but in some of your photos the subject is to close, which I feel confuses the viewer. Otherwise, GREAT work!

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  5. AnonymousNovember 5, 2017 at 10:00 PM

    These are all so cool! I love the way you blended the photos to match the personality/expression of the person. I really like the eighth photo the best because it has two people in it. In the future, I would suggest adding more people into your photos. Keep doing what you're doing!

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  6. AnonymousNovember 5, 2017 at 10:31 PM

    I thought you did a better job of making the subjects blend with the background more than on your first draft, nice work

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  7. AnonymousNovember 10, 2017 at 1:37 PM

    I like how you were able to work with transparency even more and made it translate it better in this section.

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