For this draft, I challenged myself to find images that didn't contain graffiti. My first photo does contain graffiti but I realized that because most of my other drafts murals and graffiti, I wanted broaden my horizon on choice of image. During the editting process, I wanted my images to not only look out of place, but also have a mysterious touch to them. I think this week was the hardest to edit because my photos were either too bright or too dark and at times I wasn't able to see what the images was trying to protray.
I think your photos were really strong this week. I love the different location you used. good job
ReplyDeleteBest batch yet!! You did a really nice job and I love how unique each image it
ReplyDeleteI liked your second and eighth photos the best because they had more creative subjects. You could play with your composition a bit more. Other than that, great work.
ReplyDeleteI really like your first photo and the eeriness that it has to it. My only suggestion would be to take less pictures of random things on the ground, like a coffee cup. From doing my research on Nathan Lyons, it's not very Nathan Lyons esque.
ReplyDeleteThe photos of the trash are your best because of the contrast between light and dark and the desolate mood you created. I also really like the photo of the graffiti on the pole because of the disconnect between seeing and understanding. Good work!
ReplyDeleteThese are great. I like your choice of black and white because it really highlights the mystery of each image. I think the images of trash on the street was your best examples of this project. Great job Lakpa.
ReplyDeleteThe black and white really connects these in a great way
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